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Review:ClearlyMe says:
Yes, this is just filled with so much YES. Let me count the ways I just freakin' ADORE!! this story :D Oh wait, I can't... 'cause I can't count that high D:

Lighting the table on fire, it was just... just PERFECT. And Mr. Conners!-- oh, if only he wasn't a married man ;D "I was gay once. For a while." you're just sooo perfect, I loff you :D

And just, all the awkwardness. I was just reveling in it; it twass amazinnn' :D The kiss, the kiss was just perfectly written :D not many go into detail like that, but you did. YOU DID. and it was perfect, and I just can't stop squealing at this because I'm weird. You're fluffy-awkwardness of a story makes me weird, I hope you're happy D:

I wonder if David's going to fall in love with her, and be all like "ohmygosh, I really am gay!" but then Frankie will be all like "Oh, it's cool. I'm a girl." and they'll live happily ever after? Yes? I want that too happen, but then the story'd be over and my life would go along with it D: But, now that I think about it... how will this go over :o Will David be all pissed because Frankie's a girl? Or not care? Or will his SISTER find out first? :o or the ALL-KNOWING MISTA CONNERS?


There's just too much awesome-ness in this story, I just can't stop. It was amazing, and I'm just going to die because the amazing-ness. -dies-

Author's Response: Haha! I'm glad you liked this chapter so much! Mr. Connors is, as everyone seems to agree, the best!.

Ughhh, the awkward in this story is just... overwhelming in so many ways. It just comes from all directions haha. I thought it was important to describe the kiss because if i was like, 'and then they kissed, the end' then it wouldn't have seemed like as big of a deal as it was. Frankie's first kiss = kind of a big deal, don't you agree?

HAHA WHAT IF MR. CONNORS FIGURED IT OUT BEFORE DAVID OMG I WOULD DIE LAUGHING. But as for your other theories, I will say nothing -zips lips-

Thanks so much for reading and I'm so happy you enjoyed it!


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