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Review:xtinjsc says:
This was heartbreaking. :S

It's always hard for me to read about terminal characters, because I also had to think about my own mortality after reading them. Teehee. I like the way you presented this story. I think your writing was impressive and there were definitely quite a few lines in here that took my breath away. For example:

"In the sunlight, it exposes truths I don't want to realise, condolences I don't want to recognise, and sympathy I don't want to receive."

Beautiful. Your style is rather captivating. And I think you've managed to capture Rose's anguish. She sounded so depressed and resigned and a little embittered here. I felt for her.

This was a very well-written and thoughtful piece. I'm glad I read it. :)

xtinjsc (Hufflepuff)

Author's Response: Ah, thanks! I know what you mean about the mortality after reading. It really strikes you after, and it came down on me hard after writing this. And I'm glad you think I've captured Rose's anguish - it was hard to put myself so completely in her place, so it's good to know you think I did it ok! Thanks :)

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