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Review:xtinjsc says:
I like the tiny details in this story, I thought they made the characters and the story itself more dynamic. Like that bit about Victoire laughing when she touched anything cold. It was a bit strange, yes, but it was quirky, too. And quite the temper she's got, no? But I'm glad she found a way to release all the anger by smashing Bludgers. It would've been horrible if she hurt someone or herself because of her temper.

I'm really intrigued about this 'he' person. You've put a lot of layers in his character that sometimes confused me. I found that bit about him hugging Victoire to tell her it was okay that she liked him quite nice. But then in the next paragraph he started to insult her... yeah, didn't quite grasped the reasoning for that one.

You've managed to portray her dismay and heartbreak quite nicely, though, so kudos for that. It really was an interesting read for me overall.

xtinjsc (Hufflepuff)

Author's Response: thanks so much. Victoire is based off of me in this, because this was a release for me and all of it is true. I was so sad because I felt betrayed by this guy and I put it in my form of release. Harry Potter. But this person can be anyone. . . it can be a friend, or Victoire. It can be anyone you want. Thanks for the review!

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