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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I saw your post in academica's review thread because I'm a little, I mean...a big fan of academica. I noticed your request and that it mentioned Sirius which well, to me that's just a big red arrow that says READ ME. And boy, am I glad I read this.

Your imagery is fantastic. I'm so jealous of how beautifully you write! I just pictured Sirius waking up, the sunlight causing the gold and red of Gryffindor colors to brighten his room and watching Sirius lazily get up.

I love your characterization of Regulus. He's nothing more than a snobby, privileged boy who acts too much like his parents and not enough like his own person. I can see Sirius getting angry about that, especially Regulus's snide comments. But because Sirius is the 'black sheep' of the family, well, who cares if his feelings are hurt anyway.

You really evoke some powerful emotion in this fic. I could literally feel Sirius's anger and frustration. You had my blood boiling and I was ready to pick a fight. I think it probably helped that you had just had an argument yourself. You get the best inspiration from real life, no? :)

This was just such a lovely fic. I loved the rivalry and hatred between the brothers and everything about this was just wonderful and Sirius was perfect. Nicely done.

forsakenphoenix (Ravenclaw)

Author's Response: Hey there! I'm always happy to have reviews, especially ones so lovely as yours was. :) Thank you eternally for all the nice things and lovely compliments on this story, they mean a lot to me and I am so glad you enjoyed the story as much as you did!

Many, many thanks!

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