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Review:WeasleyTwins says:
Hi, WeasleyTwins here to review as requested. I would like to apologize for the delay!

I read a lot of stories and often times, I forget the finer details of things I read. But if I remember correctly, this is quite different than the original first chapter? Be that as it may, I absolutely love what you have here. Your description is delicious. You have a lovely mixture of description and dialogue. That last sentence, dear goodness, was just, well, I don't have words adequate enough to describe it. It was breath-taking, really.

As to your plot, I couldn't be more thoroughly delighted with the entire thing. It is inventive, ravishing, delicious, intriguing, the whole lot of adjectives that really mean 'interesting.' I also enjoyed your main character here. He's so determined to find Emma. He's so raw and I like that. It's lovely to see a character who isn't cliche or so bizarre that it's ridiculous. I have to say that the entire chapter is lovely, absolutely smashing.

Shelby

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