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Review:Hyenni says:
oh, this was good.

and i'm not just saying that. this really, really was good. i'm especially glad you included the author's note stating that Travers was the one to kill Marlene - i didn't remember that bit but it suddenly gave the story a whole other dimension!
We should be perfect but we are so mismatched that it hurts.
^ that line right there is brilliant. it's absolutely the right one to be using in your story summary and everything - it's got such a lovely rhythm and bitterness to it.

for a first story? WOW. my first story was pretty pitiful compared to this, and i stuck to main characters. i love that you braved minor characters on your very first go. it's pretty promising!

loved this story - completely brilliant!

Hyenni101, Slytherin (:

Author's Response: Well hello there fellow Slytherin!
I’m glad you truly enjoyed the story! Yeah most people forget the little details and as it was basically the reason I wrote this pairing I decided to put it in the author’s note and prayed people would read the author’s note.
Well I’m glad you like that sentence I’m also quite fond of that sentence too be honest with you.
Wow thank you so much * blushes* Well I’m really fond of minor pairings and characters so yeah
Thank you so much!!

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