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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I loved this! It seems as though it could have fit very into canon. Ron's doubt at his own ability but then when he actually saved a goal...the excitement and pride he felt was so contagious. I just grinned through the whole story. I thought you did a good job narrating the Quidditch game. It's a difficult sport to write and I think you made in interesting enough. I like how you don't really describe what's going on in the game but we know what's happening through Lee's commentating. It was a nice touch.

Good job with this. I really enjoyed it!

forsakenphoenix (Ravenclaw)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad I was able to pull off the story well enough that you could get into the whole atmosphere and feel the emotions of the characters. Lee's commentary was the most unified/choesive way I could think to write the story and fits in with how JK often relates the rest of her games. Thank you for the review!

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