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Review:gingersnape says:
Wow, this was stunning. There is something about having short chapters that makes me read every single word and the full effect is just amazing. I usually kind of skip around and don't read description or boring dialogue because there is so much in any one chapter, but with this I really do take the time to just let it all soak in, and it's definitely worth it.

The blackberries just gave me such a vivid picture of Molly and I loved how it wasn't really about blackberries, but rather about this, "do you think of me? will this make you notice me?" mentality Molly had that everyone can relate to because it really is a universal yearning to know that you won't be lonely someday even though you're all alone at one point.

I also really liked the bit about jealousy and how she doesn't want that, but yet she feels it and she really has this mix of emotions that are conflicted, but that's how it is and you captured it beautifully.

I shall be off to the next chapter now, and this really is an amazing story!

gingersnape, Gryffindor

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Annie :)

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