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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Oh, this was a great story! I love reading moments in the HP books that are either missing moments, or moments that we know of from Harry's POV, but instead, from another character's perspective. I loved how you wrote this one! The quidditch game was really enjoyable and interesting to read. Haha, I always, always love Lee Jordan in the quidditch games, so I'm so glad you put him in and even gave him nice lines!

I liked hearing how Ron saved the goals. It was interesting to see that the match was actually really close. And of course, it's great hearing that Ginny caught the snitch and won! Overall, you did a great job with all the quidditch action. Nice writing, an enjoyable read.

- maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :)

Author's Response: Lee Jordan is great in the Quidditch games isn't he! Always has something to say and a few witty remarks to throw in. I must agree that missing moment are great as they provide a basic framework to work off but provide a lot of room to imagine it yourself. In this case, I knew that Ron had to save a few, Gryffindor had to win and Ginny had to catch the Snitch. Showing how Ron saved them was quite important to me as I wrote it. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!

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