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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
This was incredible! The way you wrote it was gorgeous. All the similes and imagery...just wow.
I can barely believe this is your first fanfic. It's amazing. Just the way you described Molly's thoughts was so brimming with emotion. You took me to The Battle of Hogwarts once more. I felt like I was standing in the Hall, watching everything you described. I could feel Molly's rage. And then this setence-"Oh the rage, the hate that pours through my veins like spilled gasoline touched by a spark." was fantastic. It's the kind of sentence that just stays in my head for a long time.
I love your writing, and this one shot is one of my favorite of everything you've done!
-NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Thank you! The imagery is something I worked hard on for this fic. I was amazed at how this fic turned out as well but it was something that struck me as very much needing to be written.

I worked on that one line the most out of the whole thing. I just had to get it right!

Thank you!

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