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Review:orderofthephoenix says:
This was very enjoyable to read. Such a lovely fluffy piece for Easter. :)

I love your characterisation of all the Weasleys. From Molly's lack of surprise when Ron shows her his missing toe down to Ginny's whining, typical of a small child. You've brought a real sense of family to this story where everyone is willing to help each other out.

I particularly liked where Ron is devastatingly upset about having lost his toe. It reminds me of a child who has lost their favourite toy and even the prospect of getting a new one isn't enough to cheer them up. Cleverly written, Lorren. :) You've written the behaviour of all the children realistically and brought them to life.

I have to mention Fred and George, of course. I knew they must have had something to do with this, but it still made me laugh. :P

I found a tiny typo that you'll probably want to correct: '"Tell you what," said Arthur as he grabbed his son['s] shoulder and gave him a reassuring squeeze.'

-Sophia
orderofthephoenix (Ravenclaw)

Author's Response: SOPHIA!!! Sorry about the late response!

I really enjoyed writing the Weasleys, so I'm glad you enjoyed reading my interpretation of them :D And of COURSE I'd write children well. I'm just a big one at heart ^_^

Thank you for pointing out that typo! I'll go check it out, thank ye very much :)

Lavs you!

Lorren.


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