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Review:Charmaine says:
Very well written, good little twist in there, though i had a feeling she was by his grave when she "knew he'd remain silent" I also liked how Lily just wanted to dance, which really wasn't something wizards and witches did. Also loved the references to Albus and James her brothers, excellent story, like an extract from a book.
Only negative, choked is spelt chocked by accident in the second to last stanza.
:-)

Author's Response: Thank you. I didn't want it immediately apparent where Lily was but I did leave subtle hints. I'll correct that spelling mistake too :)

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