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Review:gingersnape says:
Hello again! Taking a break from Ronald's Box because this had a pretty banner and I couldn't resist! The summary had me hooked, but then I actually got to the story and it blew me away! Your writing was so descriptive and you said so much with so few words! I really felt like I was there and my heart was racing with James' to see if it would all be okay and what would happen. I especially loved how the story began with this sort of anonymous take on the whole thing and it was just candlelight, and then it grew to have more and more action. Just brilliant, so well done! Other than a few spelling and grammar errors that happen with any fic, I don't have much in the way of CC to give you! Keep up the great writing and go Gryffindor!

gingersnape, Gryffindor

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for such a nice review. I'm so happy you enjoyed the story; it was a risk (some people don't actually get it) so I always love it when people tell me they actually do get it!
The way you described it, going from a small candelight to an entire scene, is exactly how I wrote it! The emotion just wrote itself and I really appreciate you telling me that you enjoyed my writting.
I was trying for a different style with this story and, although I'm not certain I really pulled it off, I think it's a pretty good try at describing with as little words as possible!
Thanks again for your reviews, they are always so helpful, even if it only is to help build my confidence as a writter :)

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