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Review:Alexandra says:
I've been looking for a good Bill/Fleur story to read for ages now because I'm considering writing one. So far, I'm very impressed! I really like how you've nailed down Fleur's characterisation in the first chapter: impatient, grumpy but good natured all the same! Also, it's probably just because I know they end up together but I squeed a little when Bill introduced himself haha.

There were a couple typos etc I spotted which is good because usually mine have like a hundred! Anyway, I jotted the corrections down:
Spelling:
but seeing as..
in an apartment..
get lost or hit by a bus..
Tense:
what I was going to wear

A really great start and I'm looking forward to reading the rest! :)
PantherAlexandra-Slytherin

Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad you are enjoying it. I know what you mean about the typos and i wrote these chapters a year ago now but i can't even read them back because some are so bad! I hope you enjoy the rest.

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