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Review:Flower n Prongs says:
This story was beautiful. You definitely did well for a first non-Trio centric story.

I loved the way you didn't characterize Sirius as he usually is in fan fiction and that you chose to focus on how he was once in love. Even though I'm sure it happened, most people seem to go about it the wrong way and make it seem as though there was only one woman who he would change for. I love that you made his wife somebody who accepted him for who he was, arrogance and craziness and all. It's quite refreshing. (Plus, Win doesn't seem to be a self-insert and isn't a Mary Sue, which is more unique than it should be!)

Even though I had the feeling that she was going to die, I was sad when Sirius found her dead body. We rarely got to see him in a fragile state, so I liked how you managed to characterize it so well.

The fact that he didn't mention her afterwards seems to fit, because it would be the one of the best and worst 24 hour periods of his life and he doesn't seem like the type of guy who would dwell on the past unless he absolutely had to.

As I'm sure you can tell, I really liked this piece. I think you should definitely write more Marauder fics in the future; I know I would like to read them. =)

Lily Flower (Ravenclaw)

Author's Response: Thank you!

I don't see that falling in love with someone means you'll change for them; for me it's falling in love someone who loves you for who you are. That's why Win was like that. Mary-Sue doesn't work for me! :)

Sirius seemed private especially after Azkaban and I like to think that this is something that could've happened.

Thank you so much for this!!

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