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Review:hermioneism says:
I like this story so far. However, there are a few points of plot inconsistency/confusion for me that perhaps you can clarify: in ch2, you mention Harry and Ginny live in a farm house, yet in this chapter you have them living at Grimmauld place... Also, in ch2 you mention Victoire's siblings Dom and Louis, yet in the ch after this one (9) you mention Vic is lonely as an only child (unless I read that wrong, and you meant James is lonely as an only child?)

Author's Response: Hermioneism,
I know there are some plot holes (I guess that's what happen when it takes you over a year to write a story). I am almost finished with the book, so when I am done I will go back and correct all those. I knew about a couple but thanks for bringing others to my attention :-)


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