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Review:CoLorful DreaM says:
Hello, fellow lirate!

Wow! This chapter was full of action. The description just pulled me in. I could feel what Ravel felt, step by step. And the cliffhanger... have I told you before how much I love a cliffhanger? Of Nidya and Vanessa, Vanessa seemed always the stranger one, the one I couldn't trust. Still, I can't understand her actions. At first, I really thought she's Raven's true friend, but from now I get to thinking better about it... I still don't understand why Raven went to Nidya's room, though...
Hmm, so there's a prophecy! Now I understand the point of the dream Raven had at the beginning of the story.
On the overall, I must say this story is going fantastic! The plot is so original and catchy!

Ramona
Gryffndor

Author's Response: There's a lot of unanswered questions which hopefully all of them *should* be answered in Ch. 7 :)

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