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Review:electricfeel says:
Hi, electricfeel here from the forums with your review.

I absolutely loved this. It was intriguing, original, well researched, well written etc. It was just a fantastic first chapter. I was completely lost in the story from the very first paragraph. I have to be honest and say that I didn't like the movie Inception! So I was a little wary when I read this had been inspired by it, but I had absolutely no reason to worry.

The story flows so well, as I mentioned, I was completely lost in it. The descriptions were fantastic, especially the room with the beds. I just absolutely adored the imagery of it all, the tubes, the different beds, the people. Brilliant. "His skin was stretched parsimoniously over his beaky nose and high cheekbones, giving him the gaunt appearance of an emaciated crow" -- this was just such a fantastic line!

Another thing I love was the setting. I don't think I've ever read a story on HPFF based in Delhi. Can I ask why you chose there?

I was a little lost as to who the character actually was. I guess that was what you were after? All along I was imagining Percy until the final line "What do death eaters dream of?" So now I'm really intrigued!

Anyways, I'm sorry this review isn't more constructive, but I don't think there is anything I would change about it. Feel free to request again :)

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for for quick--and complimentary!--review. I'm glad you picked out that line...it's my absolute favorite as well. ^_^ As for why I chose Delhi...mainly, it was because one of the more important characters in the story is part of a sect of Hinduism called the Aghori, so I thought a little intro to his background would be useful. Also, part of my family is from South Asia, so I have some experience with that part of the world.

Unfortunately, this is a prologue--so the story doesn't stay in India, nor does it stick with the characters introduced. They will all reappear though, and you'll learn who "Emma" and "the deatheater" are soon!

I hope you aren't too disappointed by the next chapters, which are a bit different from the prologue--I would love to hear more of your compliments! o'.'o

xoxo wenderbender


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