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Review:Prongs05JP says:
Wow, this is really good! I really enjoyed it! I thought it was quite clever how you incorporated Ron in this... did he die? Or did he just leave? I guess we'll never know. Would've been fantastic to see a snippet of the argument, don't you think? This song fits so well with the fic you were writing, it was really clear and matched the story very well. So good job!

My only criticism is perhaps *how* close to the song the story was. It's always fab to have a story that follows the songs, but its also nice to deviate a little, instead of literally incorporating the lyrics into the piece. Like "she wanted to kick out the windows and set fire to the whole building" is almost exactly the same as "she feels like kicking out all the windows and setting fire to this life" - it would've been really cool if you *could* have mentioned Hermione wanting to set fire to the building, but maybe in a different sentence or phrase?

Either way, I absolutely love this - a creative idea, and Hermione was really well characterized - I can just see her breaking down and being confused over her loss of Ron. :( (again, I really wonder what happened!)

Fantastic job! 7/10
--Nick x

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