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Review:Prongs05JP says:
Oh, wow, this sounds exciting! This is a great start to a story! Carter definitely sounds like an intriguing character, I wonder what her past is with Voldemort? My favourite part of this has to have been the beginning, the description was lovely, and really gave me a picture for the scene - it would've been great if that same description could've been incorporated in the rest of the story, like describing Dumbledore perhaps, his office? It's always great just to step back and tell the reader what they're seeing, and that's the only thing I think this story could improve on. ^_^

What does the Weasley house look like? I mean, obviously everyone has seen it before (any decent Harry potter fan BETTER have seen it!) and what about Dumbledore's office? Are there any significant features about the Death Eaters? Questions like this, if answered, just make it an all round better story, with much more pace and flow. :)

But I absolutely loved this idea! Sounds like it could be pretty exciting! I'm guessing Carter will go to school with Harry and Ron, possibly? Sounds like that could be fun. I really hope you carry this on, I'll look out for it if you do!

8/10 Brilliant!
--Nick x

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