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Review:In The Shadows I Dwell says:
YES FINALLY! *jumps about with un-contained excitement*
Finally the realisation and admittance has arrived, just at the perfect moment as well! I think what I love most about this situation is how you've been building up to it for so long that when it finally arrived it was beyond anything I could have expected in terms of sheer awesomeness. For her to admit such a thing to Mary would have been so difficult, but then again I suppose she had to tell someone!

I for one, am Siriusly hoping she does not come to her senses any time soon, (bad joke I know) but I have to say, your writing of the conversations between all the characters is so perfect, I always love extremely well written and believable dialogue, and I believe you've captured the age of the characters well in how they speak to one another, every single time. I honestly can't wait for the next chapter, you are a seriously talented writer, so I'm going to move on straight away!

- Ash (InTheShadowsIDwell)
(Gryffindor)

Author's Response: Yeah, she took her time, didn't she? But then again she did have some issues to deal with in the form of that annoying ex, so there were other things on her mind besides personal epiphanies. And yes, she had to tell someone, ashamed though she was of becoming just like everyone else, so Mary has to bear her secret. Then again, she bore Mary's crush on James, so it's only fair, right?

And thank you so much in saying that my dialogue is age-appropriate, as that is something I tried to do yet, as my own teenaged years are so long ago, something I wasn't sure I had got right. *happy dance*

cheers, Mel

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