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Review:Blue Flame says:
This was a decent start! I think that a bit more explanation as to what exactly is keeping the teachers away wouldn't have gone amiss, but it was good! ^^ There were some things grammar and punctuation wise that you might want to snag a beta for, which would help to improve the story!

It was interesting and cute idea that I've not seen before, though I would envision a bit more chaos and disorder with the absence of teachers, even if the head boy and girl are trying to keep things under control. Just something that happens when so many kids are left without supervision, you know? =P

Good job though! Keep writing! ^^

Cappie/Hufflepuff

Author's Response: Blue Flame,
Thanks for the review,
some of these ideas are from a very large work I am working on and I wanted to get an idea of whether or not they would work as a side story.


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