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Review:justonemorefic says:
Ooer, very interesting oneshot! I saw the description and I saw the genre and wasn't sure what to expect. It was quite sudden, her death -- I had hoped to know who it was! There's sort of lingering open threads that I'm dying to see tied up. Do you have a person in mind for the murderer?

Perhaps a little overly descriptive in the middle -- I'd like some more thoughts on Liam and the wedding throughout, kind of making it a little more cohesive if possible. But I really quite liked your version of Dom. Well done on such a tragic tale! I

- justonemorefic, Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, you review made my day! I'm a huge fan of your stories (which you probably know, I've left you a few reviews here and there...promise I'll leave more :P), so seeing you review one of mine was a huge shock!

I actually have no idea who the murderer was. I was writing from Dom's mind, so I only really saw it from her perspective. Ideas floated around in my mind after I wrote this, but nothing specific. This was written spontaneously, the idea to have her murdered popped into my head one morning, and then...I just went with it.

Thanks for the suggestions, I've read over that section and I must agree. Thanks SO much for the review!

-Giola


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