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Review:In The Shadows I Dwell says:
InTheShadowsIDwell from the forums here with your review! I have to say, this is a very intriguing start to your story, I've see it in in your signature over at the forums and have been meaning to get around to reading it, so now I've actually started. What I particularly like was the overall character of Jayde, which is saying alot as i usually dont like OC's all too much! I really liked her because I, despite not being magical could actually relate to in several ways, the background you've provided us with has already shown us that she is separated from her peers in the Muggle world, and I almost can't help bit wonder about her eyes changing color and whether it has something to do with it. You seem to have caught the schoolyard bullying scenario well also, and overall it was realistic and believable.

Your use of language was also very nice, I noticed no real grammatical errors, nor spelling errors so that's always a nice start! Your story flowed very nicely also, mixing the past and the present well to create a really nice effect! Well done on such an interesting beginning, I shall be sure to return to read some more in the future!

- In The Shadows I Dwell

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks you SO much! I'm really glad you found the first chapter to be intriguing. I tried really hard to make Jayde relatable, and I'm glad it worked! I have to give major props to my amazing beta for the grammar and spelling; she's an absolute genius! Thank you SO MUCH!! ♥

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