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Review:leannemariesnape says:
This was a really interesting piece. I liked how the points of view switched, so the reader was able to see this important event through both eyes. I thought that your characterisation of Tonks was really good, and I liked how at the beginning of the story, her hair was "stuck" on black. That was a nice touch to the story!

She was an Auror damn it. This was such a good line. I think that it emphasised how Tonks was feeling, and I really liked how she tackled the situation with Remus. Whilst we're on the subject of Tonks, I liked how her hair turned red and she turned into a "Mini-Molly". That did make me smile a little.

Your characterisation of Remus was good, and I liked how he hated thinking like a killer. That was a good touch, and I think it helped keep him in character. I also think that the very last line was very good. It shows us what ultimately lead to him attempting to leave her.

Leanne (leannemariesnape, Hufflepuff) :)

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked how the points of view switched and that you thought it was interesting. Thanks! I figured her hair is used in the books at times so I could use it there too. I'm glad that you liked the line about her being an Auror and the idea of her being a Mini Molly, yeah, I'm glad it made you smile.

Thank you! ^^


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