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Review:Debra20 says:
WOW! Just wow. What a genius, genius, genius idea you had! This was such a great treat! I absolutely adored it.

Using Sir Cadogan as the one that witnessed Bellatrix and Tonks's duel must have been a stroke of genius. And not only that, but you captured his essence to perfection. His horror at discovering that the two were related and fighting. How he joined the Battle and jumped from portrait to portrait encouraging here, warning there were just the actions I imagined him taking. His speech was also very well managed.

There were a few confusing moments when a sentence was a bit too long to follow, but other than that I only have words of praise for your story.

My favourite part must be when Sir Cadogan tells Professor McGonagall about Tonks and she cries. That was a very touching scene to imagine. Very very well done indeed! :D

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