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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Wonderful chapter! I loved the length of it!

Ah, I loved how you included Harry on the chocolate frog cards! I saw that he does indeed get his own card made, so it was so cool to see that you included that.

Haha! And nerdy Hermione. Only she would want to collect Ptolmey. :P That was too funny, and Agrippa! I just read a book over Cleopatra Selene and Agrippa is included, and so it was so odd to see him mentioned! How funny!

Really great chapter. This story is taking shape, and you're doing it perfectly.

There's a great balance between everything. With the fluff and the small humor mixed in with all the bad that is going down and about to take place.

Also you spread out all the dialogue very well over all the descriptions, actions, and emotions and such so that we're not overwhelmed with one thing at any given time.

Great job. :)

Forum Name: Phoenix_Flames
House: Hufflepuff

Author's Response: Thanks for yet another awesome review. I take all praise and criticism and it all helps my writing. I find I always enjoy writing the second half of books more so you'll probably find an improvement in my writing the later into the book we go.

Thanks again,
Rhys.

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