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Review:Capella Black says:
Dark! This challenge was always one I meant to get round to entering, but after reading your entry, I'm glad I didn't try and beat you!

This piece is definitely full of mystery and suspense. I find myself asking all the obvious questions. Why did she die? How did she die? Why did no one care? What had happened in the rest of her life since Hogwarts, that her death wouldn't matter? I love how you evoke these questions, and even more how you purposely don't answer them. By the end, I realised that I actually didn't need to know - the point was that her death was sad and meaningless regardless. No explanations could have made it OK, so having none actually made it all more beautiful.

Really nice idea! Thanks for sharing!

CapellaBlack, Gryffindor

Author's Response: Wait, I won this challenge? Haha did not know that...haha.

I tried really hard to be suspenseful and I am glad that I succeeded. I am not allowed to say how she died...so you will just have to assume things :D. You are welcome...I am glad I shared!

xxpetrapan, Gryffindor


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