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Review:Capella Black says:
Hi Kat! This is a really sweet concept, and I love the love-hate relationship that they start with, before it develops into something more. I would once again point out that the biggest flaw is the use of author's notes and ***scene change***s. These really pull the reader out of the story and thus make us feel like you're describing the story, rather than that we're watching it directly. This breaks the mood, which otherwise is pretty poignant and moving!

Overall though, a really nice idea, and one that adds a whole new level to the sadness that is Cedric's death.

CapellaBlack, Gryffindor

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Again thank you for pointing this out to me. I really appreciate your CC, and I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story.

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