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Review:Capella Black says:
Awww! How on Earth have you made this story end well? I mean seriously, I couldn't possibly see a good way out, and yet it works. Ron's stuck with a compromise that he wouldn't choose, but that he accepts as more than he deserves, and Pansy gets enough that she can look back at the events without anger and resentment.

Overall, it's a truly mature story - in the sense that it covers mature themes maturely and so leaves the reader feeling like they've been shown a new point of view. It's uncomfortable at points, because of this, as it makes me as a reader consider things that I'd previously dismissed as inexcusable, and yet it's compelling and completely un-preachy. That's extremely rare, but extremely welcome!

Thanks so much for sharing this piece with us!

CapellaBlack, Gryffindor

Author's Response: Ah, Ella, you know me. I'm canon. Therefore, I had to find a way to make the DH epilogue still work, and for that to happen Hermione had to take him back. So, this was what I chose. No one's particularly happy with the outcome (save Pansy), but I thought it was good to see Ron and Hermione trying,a t least, to sort things out.

I'm glad that you feel like you've been shown something new here. Adultery isn't an easy thing to write about but being preachy isn't in my nature so, once I started, I was just interested in telling the story rather than telling people what SHOULD be happening, and how people SHOULD be reacting. I think that if you're old enough to read a Mature story,you should be able to make those decisions for yourself, right?

In any case, thanks again. I really love your reviews and these, when they appeared, really made my day. *hugs*

cheers, Mel

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