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Review:Capella Black says:
Finally! I've been waiting for Ron to actually get that what he was doing was wrong, and I love that it was Harry that made him see that. In particular, it's great to see Harry being angry and yet not completely turning against his friend, which given how close he is to Hermione, could have been a possibility. Still, Harry isn't one to take sides, and you've captured that really well.

I particularly love the Britishisms in this chapter - they're not that easy for many writers, but in this chapter you've used them perfectly, and it really adds a air of authenticity to the story. Nice one!

CapellaBlack, Gryffindor

Author's Response: I really liked this scene with Harry, actually. He'd be torn, because the two of them are his closest friends (not including Ginny), but he'd also be slapping Ron about the head a bit, figuratively of course, to make him see things as they should be seen, not from the self-justification angle he's been using to be able to live with himself. I was really pleased to get a review from a man of similar age to me in which he said he'd had that talk with a friend of his and I got it down pat, so clearly I was doing something right here.

I have to admit I had to read it through again to work out what Britishisms I used, but then again I'm pretty used to them by now (I think) so maybe it was second nature. In any case, thank you!! *beams*

cheers, Mel

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