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Review:Capella Black says:
Were you having a man-hating season while you wrote this? Because at every turn, Pansy becomes more likeable, and Ron seems more like a self-obsessed jerk. I'm not saying this isn't true to reality in some cases, but it's not the way most people would come at this pairing!

Having said that, it's continuing to be completely believable. Pansy hasn't got an agenda, or anyone else for her to turn to instead of him, so wouldn't be anything but nice. While Ron has everything to lose and no reason to treat her well. This makes it very hard for him to end up as the good guy, and thus he doesn't.

Not sure if I'll like him any more in the future chapters, but very keen to find out!

CapellaBlack, Gryffindor

Author's Response: Lol. Man-hating? No. Very pregnant, yes, though, so maybe that was coming out. And Ron being the self obsessed jerk was the only way to keep this going, really, in the way I wanted it too. But then again, he's a good man, so doing something like this would really screw him around mentally, don't you think? The self justification mingled with the guilt would probably have that effect on him, I suspect.

cheers, Mel

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