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Review:Capella Black says:
Again, this chapter has both annoyed and intrigued me. Annoyed, because I hate people cheating, and yet intrigued, because I can really understand why they are both doing it, even if I wouldn't condone it.

I love how you've constructed this slippery slope for Ron to tumble down. It was just a drink. It's just meeting up with a school chum. It was just a one night stand. It is escapism and a set of 'encounters'. Pansy's justification - that he needs a break and to relax - is even more believable, if that's possible, because if that's how she sees such activities generally, then why wouldn't she see her own that way too?

So yeah, this chapter was all about the inevitability of it all, and the way they both allow the situation to happen. Really nicely done.

CapellaBlack, Gryffindor.

Author's Response: Got it in one. You can understand the behaviour but you don't condone it. Just what I was going for, so thank you! :) It was indeed a slippery slope but again, that's how these things happen, one step at a time, and then you're in too deep to get out of it. Sigh. Still, I'm really pleased that you're getting this much out of it because it was a tricky thing to get right, with the motivations and the self-denial and everything. So thanks again!

cheers, Mel

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