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Review:Capella Black says:
Ron Weasley! Also, Melian! I'm a little shocked! On the other hand, I'm glad to see that he was acting somewhat spontaneously, because adultery Ron isn't someone I like very much.

Having said that, you're reasonings are really good - it's not just "I don't get this at home so I can do whatever I want", but it's also not "this is wrong, why aren't I stopping?". Instead it's the perfect mix of guilt and defensiveness, that fits both the plotline given and the character of Ron.

Weirdly, as I'm going off Ron, I'm beginning to like Pansy more. She's very believable, and doesn't make excuses for who and what she is, which I find oddly endearing. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next. On that note...

CapellaBlack, Gryffindor!

Author's Response: I don't like adultery-anyone very much, but it does happen (quite a lot, unfortunately) and I was trying to show how it could, even when someone is happily married. He feels guilty and he knows that what he's doing is wrong, but he can't help himself and is therefore defensive to try to save some face. I hated doing this to him (he's a great character and I really don't think adultery is in his psyche) but, hey, isn't that the point of a challenge?

cheers, Mel


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