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Review:Capella Black says:
No! Run away now! Hmm, it seems that no matter how much I shout at Ron, he isn't going to listen to me.

I LOVE how you've started this story so far. As you've said, this is a pretty hard pairing to make realistic, and yet I'm completely buying this. I can totally see the combination of booze, loneliness and 'but it's ok, I know her' leading to Ron letting his guard down, and I can't wait to see how it plays out from this point onwards.

As ever the writing style is flawless and a pleasure to read. I always feel with your stories that I am simply right there, rather than listening to someone tell me about it. I think it's how you avoid unnecessary florid prose, and instead use metaphor and description simply when needed. That's rare, but so powerful.

CapellaBlack, Gryffindor.

Author's Response: Hi Ella! And thanks for dropping by this story, because it hasn't had a lot of attention (despite the short chapters which I hoped might get it some reads during review fest, hahaha).

Anyway yes, Ron, run away now! But I was given a pairing and had to pursue that to wherever it took me, and for Ron that is, indeed, a combination of booze, loneliness and familiarity, as you said. Not wise of him, but then again if people are thinking straight then these situations just don't happen, do they?

thanks again, Mel


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