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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Hello! Sorry it has taken my days to read this and review when you recommended your story to me on the forums I got so many people asking me to read theirs as well.

I thought the first chapter was rather good. You really have a knack for description. Rose seems very 'Rose' if that makes any sense whatsoever. I like Scorpius as a singer, I could actually see that happening but I can see where you're going with the story. Rose doesn't exactly hate Scorp but she dislikes him because she thinks he's a womanizer and Scorp isn't actually a womanizer and he's going to prove it to her. I'm not saying that's a bad thing because everyone always adds their own twists and flavor to the Scorp/Rose 'love-hate' or 'hate-hate' relationship that makes it popular.

I hope you don't think I'm being mean because honestly I'm not. It's a good start! I really can't say anything more because this was just the first chapter, the introduction to your characters. It seems like you put a lot of thought into the story so it will be interesting to see where it goes. I could be wrong with my predictions!

Author's Response: hey thank you so much for your review! I'm glad that you thought that my first chapter was good and that i did a great job with description (some help from my beta with this but i think i'm getting better at it). We shall all see where the story takes them and i cant wait for people to find out.

~Slytherinchica08~


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