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Review:momotwins says:
Well, the ending was a bit rushed, but I think if you hadn't pointed it out in an a/n I wouldn't have really noticed it. I do think it's much better than you maybe think it is - solid win for sure, and not just for the mere fact of having been written. It's good writing, homegirl. The Lily/James at the beginning, the child-Snape and his realization of his death, I think you wrote them extremely well - not contrived at all, actually, even if the subject matter has been handled by a lot of other authors. Yours is definitely one of the best I've read of this type of story. The description is excellent, and the emotions are well-done so they're present for the reader but not in-your-face if that makes sense. It's got a very modern-literature sort of feel to it, which I like about it. I'm glad you're writing again!

WTM - Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Thank you so much, WTM. I'm a self-loather when it comes to writing so hearing stuff like this from someone whose writing I really admire makes me want to delete my stories just a little bit less. Oh, and I'm glad I can help my readers find the flaws in the story all that much easier. I'll need to remember that before I say things like that in my next a/n :P

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