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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Wow, this is getting really interesting! It's definitely a very unique next gen, and that is a good thing!

I loved the flashback/memory thing. I'm a big fan of adding memories into stories in general, but the way you did it added a lot to an otherwise pretty slow chapter. It made it way more interesting, which I loved.

You've done some really amazing things with Dom. I've seen her characterized in a lot of different ways, but never like this. Never so, for lack of a better word, derranged. She's obviously going through a lot of inner turmoil, and I'm interested to see how that'll play out.

Another great chapter!
-NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Thank you! It's definitely a bit slow, but there will be memories and flashbacks scattered around. And yeah, Dom's a bit off her rocker... makes it an interesting character to write about! Thanks for the review :)

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