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Review:LunarLuna says:
It's not too difficult to guess... ScoRose? Anyway, I thought it was well done, the strange, awkward sort of teenage angst was perfectly described and the characters where believable. You might want to make the paragraphs a little more descriptive though, not necessairly about the characters, since you obviously wanted to keep that a little faded, but maybe the emotions, and events, because it sounds a little rushed. I loved the way you ended the fic. I seriously felt the joy, delight and suprise that the main character (Rose?) felt. So that was mastered.

All in all, a very good fanfic. And i really liked it! :D 9/10

~LunarLuna of Slytherin

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I defintely had Rose and Scorpy in mind when I was writing this~ but I allow it to be anyone. Though, they do seem to be the only canon characters that fit...

Thanks for the advice! I'm glad you feel the angst was good-I am a teenager, but I've never been in love. Or had my heart broken...or even been in a relationship. So to hear that you think it was perfectly described made me happy. Thank you so much! As for being rushed...that's a culprit in many of my stories. I need to work on that :) Thank you!

~Sara


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