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Review:Singularity says:
So I read through this story and when I finished, I went back and read through it again. Then, when I finished the second time, I went back and read it out loud. It's an awesome story just reading it, but hearing it out loud made it even better. The pacing and the imagery and the alliteration in places are just brilliant. It's a story that begs to be told and to be read out loud, at least for me.

I loved the vagueness of the story as well. Each time I read it, I thought of something different, which is really unique and a little bit amazing. It sent a shiver down my spine and made me want to turn on the lights and look around my apartment ;P

I do a lot of my writing in the middle of the night as well, but I can't say that I've ever come up with something like this. This is really lovely. The last line especially is just so...creepy/beautiful...does that make sense? I hope so, because I definitely mean it as a compliment.

Really amazing job.


Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm still never sure about what reactions I get to this oneshot and I'm glad you like it :)

I read it aloud many times before I posted it to make sure it 'sounded' right, even if it were read slightly differently. I tried to make it possibly a little tragic -- or at least able to be interpreted that way -- and I hoped that would give it a morbid beauty in its end.

Thank you very much! ^__^

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