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Review:CoLorful DreaM says:
This was a really sweet moment. Oliver Wood seemed so silly while talking with his newborn daughter. :)) What can possibly a Quidditch obsessed father talk to his newborn child about? Well, Quidditch, of course. I liked all the emotion that flew through him when first seeing his daughter. It was something unique for a father, I guess.
The fact that his wife is a muggle, not just another Quidditch addict is very good! I was so tired of those... Though, I liked the idea of both of them 'flying'. It was a really lovely comparison.
Well, after reading the summary, though, I couldn't help but feel sad about Oliver's expectations...


Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you for reveiwing :)
I've always wanted to write Oliver & baby, not sure why but hey ho :P I'm not a man or father :L but I'm glad I got the emotion right for the scene, I was worried I'd get it wrong not knowing how it felt but I did do a bit of research on new dad sights :P

It's a bit cheesey :P but hey, who doesn't like cheesey once in a while + Sarah's job makes it awkward in later chapters :(

Sorry to make you feel sad :( but thanks for the awesome review! :D

R xx

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