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Review:MyMyMiss says:
Excuse me, person who thinks its okay to write about the Battle like you do... Teach me? Pretty please ^.^ You have soo much talent !!! *Glares && Hands cookies*

Onward...

I really like how you portray Malfoy as the nice guy in this, in the majority of stories we read or see that say Herione/Draco, it's always Draco is evil, Draco is the Vilian, yada yada yada, yet you made him the sweet, caring sensitive guy.

I like how you wrote that he was still in no positiion too be his friend ^.^ I thought that was quite good. Even though he was good all along, he still understood where he stood on Hermione's little tree and branches - Friendship and relationship wise - +I think it was really cute that he mouther 'inpedimenta' too her to warn her :P Quite a cute scene in my opinion.

You have a very nice consitient flow, it didn't jump backwards and forwards, it was straight to the point and kept me very intrigued. ^.^ Which is hard too do, cause i'm a fussy reader !! :P

Hermione Dirty? Never :P She's just been laying on the ground for a considerably long time and was tortured the poor thing :D

You can defiently write emotion and scenes that we can see happeneing befor our eyes ^.^

I loved it!!!

10/10 - Cause i'm cool like that ya see ;)

Forum Name: MyMyMiss
House: Slytherin.

Author's Response: thanks so much for the wonderful review :D yep, AD was right, you just made me feel super good about my writing :D lol not bad for my first fic ever right? lol

again, thanks so much MMM :D


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