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Review:In The Shadows I Dwell says:
Hi there!
InTheShadowsIDwell from the forums here with your review! I must say, I was absolutely captivated by the banner as I scrolled through your Author's Page, there's something so captivating about such a dark and mysterious banner I simply had to read it. I particularly love how your first line completely set the scene for the entire story, there is something rather unnerving about darkness, and I felt that you really captured this situation perfectly, in particular your characterisation of James, who to me was perfectly in character both in terms of his actions which are often too quick and un-thought through, and in his treatment of Lily and his son, and I think you really highlighted this in the stunning of the Healer, which seemed to come entirely as a defensive reaction to the situation and really showed the danger of the world they were living in.

Your writing is beautiful, I have to say, it was very descriptive (something I really enjoy when reading) and you've captured the emotions of James well, to the point where they are completely and utterly believable! I particularly loved the plot of this small piece, you've managed to capture such an amazing moment in such a short space of time! Well done!

- In The Shadows I Dwell
(Gryffindor)

Author's Response: Alright, this is ackward... I'm really sorry for the delay but can you believe I am finally getting to your review seven months later? Yeah, things got a bit out of my hands in the last couple months and I'm really sorry about the delay.

The banner is awesom, isn't it? I forwarded your compliment to the maker by the way and she thanks you a lot (I don't think a lot of people do that...). As for the story itself, glad it lived up to the banner!!

Your comment about being descriptive makes me very happy because I worked a lot on this aspect in this story so Im glad it showed! Descriptions were also at the heart of this story; in order to set the mood mostly and show what kind of world they were living in. Everything had to be taken like a possible attack and James particularily lost it when it came to his Lily :)

I'm glad you liked it and thank you again for this lovely review. I apologize once more about the delay, I'm really ashamed to have left it go for so long.

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