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Review:Cleopatraa says:
Well wow didn’t expect this. It was so deep to tell you the truth I expected something much more shallow. Sorry but that’s what I truly expected I expected a great but a lot more shallower (sp?) story. The story was in a way quite poetic and I like the fact it’s so simple but still so incredible powerfull. Every word just hits the mark. I mean I could feel with you character I could place myself in her shoes and that’s something a lot of writers can’t pull off. So kudos for you on that! Hmm I just realized the story is a podcast and I can see exactly why such a simple but still such a complex story.


I think it’s great she didn’t get him. That she didn’t get her happy end. I mean yes it’s sad and harsh but life usually is. Harsh I mean. Reality isn’t that you get the perfect guy and the perfect life ( otherwise they skipped me) So yes it’s great she didn’t hget him and he didn’t put much thought on her I always thought Sirius found his friend much more important then his flings.


You know as you’ve seen throughout my review that I think this was amazing but I think the story would be greater, in my opinion, well if she had stayed anonymous It would fit the whole one night stand, a number on a list or a notch in your bedpost thing that was going one. It was something I immensely enjoyed while most of the theme I hate it when a writer portrays Sirius does that. So I have to say well done on that you made me like something I dislike.


Well I truly enjoyed your story! Good luck with any future work!

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