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Review:SpringSinger19 says:
Great piece(: I loved it! Your imagery drew me in from the bat and you kept up quite consistently throughout the entire story. You kept pretty consistent to cannon as well which was a definite plus.

I loved the conversation between Sirius and James. It was believable, which I loved. Both were very in-character which was refreshing(:

I also liked how you characterized Narcissa. It seemed natural. I was a little surprised at how human you made her out to be at first but you showed me when she went all seductress on James.

I also liked James' hesitation because of Lily and the fact that he wasn't a ladies man. That was realistic. I hate it when Marauder Era stories make Sirius and James out to be total sluts. It just doesn't exactly work for me.

Great job! I love how this fit into Sirius' running away and living with James. I wish I could've seen his reaction to James' actions. That would've been a laugh!

Good job and thanks for entering(:

Author's Response: Thank you! I've been picturing the Marauders for years, since it's my favourite era but I must admit, I never pictured THIS one night stand haha. Narcissa was fun to write, since you never see her to anything big until the end of DH. I'm another one who didn't picture James or Sirius to be super slutty. Just because they were good looking doesn't mean they have to be jerks! Thanks for the challenge, it was a lot of fun to write!

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