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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
Oh, this was just so beautiful and precious. I was a little wary when I saw what challenge this was for because I don't like to cry when I read fanfics, but oh, I'm glad I read this. You describe the struggles of a young girl who must overcome every day obstacles to reach her goal, how she must find a way to get to the red box because all she wants to do is help her sister.

You have a knack for writing sibling dynamic so very well. I'm envious of your ability to put into words what I feel on an every day basis with my siblings. It's beautiful to read.

If anything made me tear up, it was this line right here: “Can Mommy or Daddy stick it on you?” Just, oh my god, the naivety of a young girl is so so precious and she just wants to help her sister by giving her hair.

This line broke my heart too: She was bruised in places on her legs and arms where stronger children would not have been hurt. - because Lucy understands her sister's illness in only the way a young child can.

I just adored this to pieces, and I love your writing so much. Your descriptions are fantastic. :)

forsakenphoenix (ravenclaw)

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