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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
What an interesting twist on a somewhat cliched relationship. I love Rose's reaction to her mother kissing Draco Malfoy and Hermione being amused by it all. I like how you described Draco as a coward until the final battle but was kind of confused about him working for the Order?

I always get so excited reading about duels. There's just something about the adrenaline rush that is so fun to read about. I enjoyed that you had Lucius taunting Hermione, especially mentioning how he didn't even have a tear in his robes and he's got her with Sectumsempra and other curses. It makes it more real that they're just children fighting in this war against adults.

I was a little shocked at first that Draco killed Lucius but I guess he didn't have a choice. It was kill or be killed and he chose to live. Then the kiss at the end and poor Draco being punched out by Ron. I'm glad it didn't turn out into a full-out Dramione romance and Hermione still ended up with Ron. But it was nice of her to show some compassion to the boy who had tormented her growing up. Showed that they were both mature and growing up. Nice job for a first story. :)

forsakenphoenix (ravenclaw)

Author's Response: thanks so much! :D I'm glad you liked it :D

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