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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
A ring! Is he going to propose? Well that would alleviate Lucy's fears that he didn't want to marry her but it doesn't mean that she wants to irregardless of whether it's expected or not. I think I'd be annoyed if I was Lucy and my friends who pretty much stopped talking to me after I got together with my boyfriend tried to warn me off him a year and a half later. I know that they're just looking out for her but you can't just start and stop a friendship.

I liked how you described a marriage between two Pureblood families as a business arrangement because that's pretty much how I always imagined them to be.

And your little sentence about Bella was fabulous. I always love when you write Bellatrix, you seem to have an understanding of her character without ever really writing about it. It's nice. :)

The one bad thing about shorter chapters is I find it hard to write about things and write a decent size review. I'm trying!

forsakenphoenix (Ravenclaw)

Author's Response: That's one of the things that I sort of love about the Lucy/Sev relationship. Unlike with Sirius, where there was all this pressure to propose, Sev can propose to her when he wants, if he wants. And yeah, it would be a little annoying, but she still misses her best friend, and she feels a little hurt that her friends just left her behind because of her choice of partners, especially after Lily was the one that inadvertently got them together. Lily and Remus have got the best of intentions here; there's not really any party in the situation that gets off easy with this one.

Thanks! Yeah, that was what I was trying to get at with the young age and the fact that Narcissa was crazy concerned about the wedding details instead of the fact that she's marrying some guy while still a teenager.

Oh, yes, Bella. I'm slightly enamored with her.

You're doing fine :) I appreciate all the reviews!

academica


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