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Review:Roots in Water says:
Such a beautiful one-shot. I could definitely feel her emotions coming through, her confusion (but yet, not confused) about her love for him. You pointed something out very well: love can hurt, just as it can cause pleasure.

This was short, but it said all that needed to be said. The beginning was wonderful, an immediate contrediction and shows her conflicting emotions.

This was beautifully written. Truly. I loved the repetition you used (You were Sirius- so simple, yet with so many levels). And then the line: "One night stand. It sounds so... pathetic." I don't have the words to explaiin it. Wait- yes, I do. It's like she's almost regretting it, as if she feels she should, but she doesn't. (Excuse me if I'm interpreting this all wrong).

The last line, especially, was amazing. Such a powerful ending, one that perfectly expresses her feelings, her thoughts. "Thank you for letting me." So simple, so strong...

I'm so glad I read this. It was wonderful.

Roots in Water (Hufflepuff)

Author's Response: Hey Roots in Water! Thank you so much for the returned review! So sweet of you. *hugs*

And thank you! Wow! I'm always so thrilled to hear when the emotion of the piece is coming across as intended! This story really is sort of one giant contradiction, but I'm glad that you found beauty in it - really, I appreciate the comment so much!

I see you and I both love a simple repetition in a one-shot... I fall for it every time! ^.^ I'm so glad you enjoyed what I threw in. No! That's such a great interpretation! Almost wishing she did regret it, but knowing that she never could. Beautifully put, thank you for that!

*dies* You're far too kind. I really love that the last line stayed with you, that the simplicity of the piece still provided strength. I'm very flattered, thank you so much.

I'm so glad you read this, too! :-D Really, I so appreciate you taking the time to leave this review. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

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