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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I think this has to be my favorite chapter so far. I could pick out entire paragraphs where I just fell in love with your writing. I think my favorite was the paragraph before Lucy agrees to give a relationship with Severus a try. The silent promises Lucy made, how desperate she was to know that those promises would be returned to her. The little insight you give us into everyone else's Christmases. I found it amusing/disturbing your idea of the Black's Christmas cheer. The last sentence was perfect. It wrapped up the chapter nicely. They both were isolated from their families but they still found comfort in one another. Just lovely.

forsakenphoenix (Ravenclaw)

Author's Response: Hello again!

Yes, I've gotten lots of compliments on this one. It's funny, because when I initially wrote it, that last section wasn't in there. I typed it up and thought, hmm, this needs to be a little longer, and I just sort of wrote all of that. But I love it too; it kind of sets their relationship into a larger spectrum, reminding you that they are just two of the players in a wider scheme. You'll find that their relationship will continue to affect the lives of Lucy's friends later on. And I'm glad you liked my concluding sentence as well. I do love me some fluff :)

Thanks for another thoughtful review :)

academica


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